--- xml/htdocs/proj/en/glep/glep-0042.html 2005/11/05 03:33:17 1.1 +++ xml/htdocs/proj/en/glep/glep-0042.html 2005/11/07 17:02:42 1.2 @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@
Preemptive
Users should be told of changes before they break the user's system, -after the damage has already been done.
+not after the damage has already been done.
No user subscription required
It has already been demonstrated [4] that many users do not read the gentoo-announce mailing list or RSS feeds. A solution which @@ -257,7 +257,7 @@ text.

The text body should be wrapped at 72 characters. No fancy formatting or tab characters should be used -- the news item may be being displayed directly to a -terminal. Paragraphs should be separated by two blank lines.

+terminal. Paragraphs should be separated by a blank line.

Hyperlinks may be used to refer to further information (for example, an upgrade guide). However, the main body of the news item should be descriptive and not simply a "read this link" text. It is assumed that the user will have access to @@ -416,11 +416,11 @@

 # Copyright 1999-2005 Gentoo Foundation
 # Distributed under the terms of the GNU General Public License v2
-# $Id: glep-0042.html,v 1.1 2005/11/05 03:33:17 g2boojum Exp $
+# $Id: glep-0042.html,v 1.2 2005/11/07 17:02:42 ciaranm Exp $
 
 DESCRIPTION="Read important Gentoo news items"
 MAINTAINER="ciaranm@gentoo.org"
-SVN_DATE='$Date: 2005/11/05 03:33:17 $'
+SVN_DATE='$Date: 2005/11/07 17:02:42 $'
 VERSION=$(svn_date_to_version "${SVN_DATE}" )
 
 get_news_item_list() {
@@ -661,7 +661,7 @@